Today, Potowmack Elementary School dedicated a new section of its playground to Ms. Amanda Lorenzo, a Third Grade teacher who died in April. All of the children were involved in a very moving ceremony, and it gave me cause to think...
I think the audio is effective here: your being moved is evident in your tone. It was clear to my four-year-old that the tone was one of somber importance because she said "poor guy" as she listened. The fact that you address family and the way it pertains to Loudoun and America is a critical one. This post is an example of where text and audio would be good. :)
Mr. Stevens,
ReplyDeleteI think the audio is effective here: your being moved is evident in your tone. It was clear to my four-year-old that the tone was one of somber importance because she said "poor guy" as she listened. The fact that you address family and the way it pertains to Loudoun and America is a critical one. This post is an example of where text and audio would be good. :)
Happy weekend!